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| Messages found: | "Thank so much" Posted by lola76101 23 May at 07:58
You saved my life.
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| Thread started by: | "Ot help me please.." Posted by lola76101 22 May at 18:07
Hello to everyone I came from the italian forum and I'm here to ask you an help. I wrote a text but i don't know anyone to correct it. may you be so kind to read and tell me if there is any mistake? It depends my life on it.....I'm joking but it is really very important to me. Thanks. Lola
Welcome to a place set among the Holy See and the Roman Renaissance beauties. Welcome to a place among a traditional architectural style and the most contemporary trends. Welcome to a place of experimentation among new techniques and the re-elaboration of a scientific architecture. Welcome to a non conventional place where apparently incompatible realities are melt into new ideas and atmospheres .
Welcome to ....
Architecture goes on stage as on a theatre. ....is an Italian structure with a totally Italian style. .... is a structure unique in its kind, its a real experience where nothing is pure coincidence and where art and technology are practically joined at the hip. It is a dynamic place where architectural projects are improved in a strategic setting that creates the atmosphere. This fusion of a planning style and final products will not co-exit somewhere else, but its a reality in a method that tends to new challenges and new architectural technologies, as for example in the Building Automation.
The last one is not intended as a technology to create mere products but as a detailed work of analysis and planning, to satisfy each customers demands. In other words, this place is not intended to sell projects or products but to create a lifestyle.
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| Messages: | | "I forgot ..." Posted by mariajw 22 May at 22:51
co-exit should be co-exist
Maria x
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| | "Thank so much" Posted by lola76101 23 May at 07:58
You saved my life.
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| | "Some grammatical corrections ..." Posted by mariajw 22 May at 22:42
Hi Lola
I have made some grammatical corrections. I've marked them with *** so you know where I have changed them.
Maria
Welcome to a place set among the Holy Sea*** and the Roman Renaissance beauties. Welcome to a place among a traditional architectural style and the most contemporary trends. Welcome to a place of experimentation among new techniques and the re-elaboration of a scientific architecture. Welcome to a non-conventional*** place where apparently incompatible realities ***deleted the word 'are'*** melt into new ideas and atmospheres.
Welcome to ...
Architecture goes on stage as on a theatre. ... is an Italian structure with a totally Italian style. ... is a structure unique in its kind, it's*** a real experience where nothing is pure coincidence and where art and technology are practically joined at the hip. It is a dynamic place where architectural projects are improved in a strategic setting that creates the atmosphere. This fusion of a planning style and final products will not co-exit somewhere else, but it's*** a reality in a method that tends to new challenges and new architectural technologies, as for example in the Building Automation.
The last one is not intended as a technology to create mere products but as a detailed work of analysis and planning, to satisfy each customer's*** demands. In other words, this place is not intended to sell projects or products but to create a lifestyle.
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| | "Erm?" Posted by busycaz 22 May at 18:17
Well maybe Holy Sea instead of See?
Cant help otherwise sorry. Is this in the wrong forum? This is a forum for surgery discussions, maybe another forum could help.
Good luck x
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| | "..." Posted by rebex2 23 May at 12:29
i think it is the holy see..like la santa sede??
are you spanish lola?
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