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Sweet memory

I remember a wonderful evening with a woman friend some five years ago. We had just celebrated our birthdays, hers two days before mine, her forty-sixth and my forty-second. After spending time with friends, we were finally alone.

She really liked it when I licked her, nibbled on her clitoris, while putting one or two fingers into her asshole. Tonight, as usual, she had already come several times.

Emphatically she says to me, "I want to suck you"; we change positions. In a state of delirium I put my head between her thighs; she raises her legs. I kiss her smooth and somewhat plump buttocks, loving their fullness, and I begin licking the little hole that I've just stimulated. I push my tongue in hard, rubbing her clitoris, and my fingers don't neglect her vagina; liquid is pouring out of her, flowing to her behind, mixing with my saliva. Though we've known each other intimately for a few months, the eagerness of her mouth still surprises me. She presses her medium-sized and quite firm breasts against my abdomen. For a second she stops sucking me and shouts, "I'm going to come!" -- Right away she convulses, then resumes her lascivious action.

My tongue continues: her rear hole opens more and more. After wetting my fingers with the lubricant we always keep next to the bed, I put them in again. Three fingers, and then she says quite loudly, "I'm going to come!" -- Each time she repeats these words I get hotter. She quiets down a bit, I kiss her pussy again, I put my hands on her hips, easily I turn her over so that she's lying on her belly. It's as though she were in a deep sleep -- but suddenly she raises her ass, signaling my next task. Completely erect and wet from her extraordinary mouth, excited by her mere presence, by her heat, I climb onto her back, and in a single thrust I plunge the entire length of my prick into her asshole. Right off she has a huge orgasm. I put my hand on her vulva to play with her clitoris, but she takes it off, wanting nothing but the delight of very intense anal sex, a pleasure she knew with no other man before me.

My movements get stronger and stronger; she manages to sigh, "I'm coming I'm coming I'm coming ," and she does so each time. I rub her breasts. Penetrating her like this, I'm in total ecstasy. She doesn't stop moaning -- now her orgasm is continuous. I kiss the nape of her neck; I whisper in her ear, "You're making me come." And I hear her soft voice: "Come, come in me, in my ass." I'm aware of my organs exploding, I pour my sperm into her guts and, incredibly, she comes once more -- my fountain continues with no apparent end, her orgasms too. Finally we come to rest, my penis getting soft in her little hole, which has a series of gentle spasms. I kiss her cheek, she turns her head to kiss my mouth, I whisper, "I love you." And she: "I love you too." I squeeze her in my arms, we lie together in bliss.

She was an extremely affectionate woman, in many different ways. For various reasons our relationship didn't last. But rather than miss the past, I prefer to enhance the pleasure of the present by enjoying my memories.

Very hot and very steamy!!!!!!

Modern Man, this is fantastic! An incredible turn-on!

I really like it that both your characters are in their 40s and f*cking like teenagers. Or is it teenagers who f*ck like sex fiends in their 40s?

I'm less than a year from 40 and still looking forward to the best sex of my life -- far better than I could have imagined 20 years ago when I lost my virginity! Your story really speaks to me -- especially since, as I'm discovering, anal sex is my own path to bliss.

Also like the fact the lady doesn't have an 'ideal' body, yet still completely enthrals the gentleman.

One criticism: a continuous orgasm? Please forgive me, but that sounds like a male porno fantasy. I'm just saying that for your fiction to be effective it should be believable -- good erotica is about fantastic sex, but sex that could really happen.

Overall though, great job, Modern Man! Are you going to post another story soon?

Mixed review

Thank you very much, Sweet D. To be reviewed in glowing terms by a writer of your accomplishment (not to mention a connoisseur of anal sex!) means the world to me.

But I take issue with your criticism: the woman in the story is based on someone real, and she really did come that way. She would come very quickly, then over and over again, until there was no separation between her orgasms. I don't know how many women come that way, but this one did.

Suggestions

My apologies -- I spoke too soon.

Not a lot of women come like that. I should say that when you write so vigorously about someone who does, especially on a site primarily for women, you give the impression that all ladies *should* come like that. Women reading it will feel inadequate, they'll spend their time in bed trying to come like that instead of just naturally f*cking. I'm afraid, Modern Man, that your story, rather than adding to women's pleasure, seriously reduces it.

And the same goes for anal intercourse: when you write about it as though it were so wonderful, women will feel pressured to do it. They'll feel inadequate if they don't like it. And they might even suffer through the pain many experience when they try it, cowed by stories such as yours into pretending they enjoy it.

In the future, please be considerate of the effects your stories might have upon readers.

Best, Sweet D

About your suggestions

First of all, I really appreciate it that a writer as accomplished and engaging as yourself, Sweet Daffodil, would take the time to offer comments on my story.

But I'm a little puzzled. You say that when I write about women who have certain preferences or habits, I put pressure on women who read my work to conform to my ideas.

I wouldn't say you don't have a right to make that criticism. But If I remember correctly, you yourself have described anal sex as a "religious experience," and the purest way for a woman to take pleasure in having sex. I wouldn't criticize you for saying those things -- to know a woman feels that way about anal sex, also my favorite activity, is great to hear!

But by writing that, Sweet Daffodil, don't you also risk putting pressure on women to feel the same way? I wonder if you're one to be pointing fingers.

All the best, Purely Modern

What i said last week

I was wrong to speak and I apologise to you. Really, I love your writing -- your story is wonderfully written. I sweat when I read the part about putting your tongue in her anus. I should lose my head if my man were to do that to me! A most sinful delight!

Last week was horrid. When I wrote, it was the day before my divorce hearing and the day after I was supposed to move into my own flat. However, in the morning my husband said something that made me think the divorce would be complicated if I were to see my man. So I didn't see my man and remained in the house.

But on Friday everything went smoothly at court. I'm now, for all intents and purposes, divorced. And my man helped me with enough things yesterday to set up house in the new place. And we made wild love in celebration of my independence yesterday evening. And he stayed the night. And he's asleep in the bedroom whilst I sit at the computer with a cup of coffee. And I'm HAPPY!!!!!

I'm so sorry I inflicted my frustrations on you. Can you forgive me? Can we be friends?

Yours, Sweet Daffodil xxxxxx

No harm done

Sweet Daffodil, you're very kind. I'm sorry to hear your situation has been difficult.

I'm VERY HAPPY you're HAPPY!!! Congratulations on your divorce and really starting up with your boyfriend! I've been following your story religiously from the beginning a few months ago, and it's simply incredible.

And I'm honored to count a woman as astounding as you are among my friends.

Sweet memory

Hot!! very hot!

Nice

Just my musings