Are these translactions corrects?

Hi boys and girls, a girl asks me to help her to translate something but I am not sure about my translactions. Would you be so kind as to correct me please? Thank you very much
Translactions
Today is monday,21st July ,or, July 21st,2008
He /she died on 24th July ,or, July 24th,2008
13th August,2008, or, August 13th,2008.
On June 25th I was home.

Both can be correct

Hi, you need a capial M for "Monday". In the UK we say the date then the month (21st July 2008) whereas in the US they say the month then the date (July 21st 2008) so it depends whether you ususally write in a British or American style.

Hy shaz

Thank you very much for your correction