I need your opinion about my sonett
hello to everybody!! I have a problem, I'm 17 years old girl from germany and I have to write a poem about love for my english lessons,exactly a sonett. My Problem: I am not so good in poetry and writing english... If you want you can read my poem, and correct my mistakes or the way i say it... i thik you can laugh about me, too the sense of the poem is a little bit silly but that isn't so important, and i don't have a regular rhythmical patter but that isnt important, too
so my sonett
Just imagine
You blink to me I blink to you Don't imagine, that I notice you
The coast is clear Where is your dear? Isn't she still here? Don't imagine, that I like you
The lightning in your eyes I do not recognize Don't imagine, that I want you
Let's face it You're not bad And that is sad Don't imagine, that I love you
I am looking forward for your answers bestwishes ...
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