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Posted by littljoe 5 March at 06:37
Hello, Well i do belive you have a winner! I liked it very much, I'm thinking you are a very talented young woman! It sounds like your right where you should be sweetheart! Please write me more! I love it. And don't imagine, that i love you! I think i do! Bestwishes to you.... littljoe add. littljoes@sbcglobal.net
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Posted by jilism 27 February at 13:59
hello to everybody!!
I have a problem, I'm 17 years old girl from germany and I have to write a poem about love for my english lessons,exactly a sonett.
My Problem: I am not so good in poetry and writing english...
If you want you can read my poem, and correct my mistakes or the way i say it...
i thik you can laugh about me, too
the sense of the poem is a little bit silly but that isn't so important, and i don't have a regular rhythmical patter but that isnt important, too
so my sonett
Just imagine
You blink to me
I blink to you
Don't imagine, that I notice you
The coast is clear
Where is your dear?
Isn't she still here?
Don't imagine, that I like you
The lightning in your eyes
I do not recognize
Don't imagine, that I want you
Let's face it
You're not bad
And that is sad
Don't imagine, that I love you
I am looking forward for your answers
bestwishes ...
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Posted by frommalaysia 27 June at 13:48
hye....
im from malaysia..
19 years old, Roman.C, male...
about ur poem, i like it..
specially your 1st pharagraph.
just wish you good luck...
may the Lord beside you..
if you have some more poem or sonnet, please send me all of them..
!!---->!! nixijilly05@yahoo.com
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Posted by littljoe 5 March at 06:37
Hello, Well i do belive you have a winner! I liked it very much, I'm thinking you are a very talented young woman! It sounds like your right where you should be sweetheart! Please write me more! I love it. And don't imagine, that i love you! I think i do! Bestwishes to you.... littljoe add. littljoes@sbcglobal.net
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To your sonett.... : Discussion Board soFeminine - 4 December
