Hello to everyone!
I'm an italian mum and i'm trying to translate a passage. I will be really pleased to you if you could read what i wrote to check if there is any problem with grammar. I know it is annoying but I'm really doing my best to translate and don't know if is correct. can someone help me please?
here the translation i have done.
Does it sound good or too accademic? i studied English to the university and I have been 1 year in wales but always to school and don't know the business english...
Really thanks to everyone. bye lola

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Mission:

We provide automation of our customer assignments with a variety of innovative, hight-quality products. We focus our professional services on their specific expectations offering technical support according to an empathic approach.


Offering :

Web Development

Static Web Sites
Dynamic Web Sites
Portals
Web appliances


Graphic Development:

Logo and Brand Design
Graphic Layout
Banners
Brochures
Cd & Dvd
Newsletter Graphic Design


Restyling

Customer interfaces
Normative Adequacy
Web Accessibility
Usability


Standard Web

Code validation
Edit Graphic Layouts
Web Accessibility
Usability

Marketing and web Promotion

Ranking
Newsletter
Access Report


Services

ASP
Hosting
Dedicated Servers
Cluster Solutions


IT Consulting

Unix/Linux Systemistic Support
Project Networks
Internet Security
Bd management
Software Optimization
Linux driver

System Integration

Didactic Rooms
Internet café
Multimedia rooms
Control rooms
Data centers

Description

Web Development

The key to any successful IT project, including your internet presence, is always based on the capability to distinguish from competitors in order to get new customers and to promote the essence of your own reality. To realize a web site is a specific response to the distinctive customer needs.

Hi, I'm certainly no expert (am a teacher!) but I understand your plight as my mother is French and often says things very differently to the English!
I think it looks fine, you may wish to adjust the mission slightly??? We provide a 'solution' to our customers 'needs/requests/requirements'... and ...support with an'understanding' approach.

Really though, Its all about personal opinion, I advise you show as many people as possible first.
S

does it sound better?

We provide It solutions with a variety of innovative, hight-quality products and professional services. We are focused on customers specific requests offering technical support with an understanding approach.